This is an entry stolen from the blog of one of my very dear friend. She had written some poetry on her blog and instantly some lines came in mind. I didn't take a moment in showing my poetic talent and scribbling in the comments. Here I present the original entry as well as my poetic answer to that:
Blog: http://searchforrandomness.blogspot.com
Original entry:
Koi fariyaad is dil se nikalti haiMy Reply:
Us dil tak nahin pahunchti
Is dil ke toot jaane ke darr se
Ye zubaan bhi nahin khulti
Paas reh kar bhi
Ehsaas hai door hone ka
Jo ab tak apna hua hi nahin
Jaane kyon darr hai uske khone ka
Use kho kar kahan jaayoge tum,
Jitna door jaayoge, utni paas use payoge tum,
Na kehna behtar hai use khone se,
Kam se kam paas hone ka ehsaas to hai...
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kya baat hai sir :)
zarra nawaazi ke liye shukriya
n very well written lines from u
"Dil me ehsaas ho sacha to judaai kaisee/
Kaid aankhon me hai tasveer, Rihaai kaisee/
Wo to har saans me, har nabz me basataa tha meri/
Phir ye chehre pe udaasi bhalaa chaayi kaisee."
sahi... tum to vividh rason ke kavi ho gaye... i'm waiting for your first hasya kavita to be here soon...