On looking at the current political and social situation, these lines came instantly in my mind:
कोई अशर्फी बाँट रहा है, तो कोई हाथ काट रहा है,
नानक-कबीर के देश में देखो, नेता, जनता को बाँट रहा है,
कोई हारा महंगाई से, किसी को जूता कांट रहा है,
क़त्ल हजारों करके कसाब, मुर्ग-मुस्सलम चांट रहा है|
-आकाशReferences:
Line 1: Various incidents of contestants distributing money to attract voters are reported during general election 2009.
Line2: Hate speeches, made by many politicians during general election 2009.
Line 6: Numerous shoe attacks on political leaders.
LIne 7-8: 26/11 Mumbai attacks accused Kasab demanded for chicken and other facilities in Jail.
MIND BLOWING...i knw my words would fall short of praising such beautiful composition. so just one word...WOW.
Kya baat hai, tu to bahut sahi poetry karne lag gaya hai aajkal!
Bahut hi sahi!!
Gaumavi ki sangati ka asar 4 saal baad dikh raha hai.. ;-)
Sundar-sundar-sundar bhai!.. uttam-uttam-uttam bhai!!.. Bahut khoob Akash!!! :)
@Bhatti : Hahaha nice to see ki kisi ko 'Gaumavi' abhi tak yaad hai :)
Btw, Akash can easily fit into gaumAvi...would you like to take the other 'A'? [:)]
Good one......
This is the quality of a good writer that he keeps a keen eye on the happenings in his era.....n u r doing it.....
Keep it up!!
:-)
you seem to be a great poet...I really liked the way you write simple words which has very deep meanings....
Bahut badhiya akaash... I love your use of words.. Reminds me of a particular doctor (from Mumbai) who was a finalist of Great India Laughter Challenge-1. He also used simple words & lines to drive home his point.
Excellent! Keep it up!
nice blog...better than your technical one :)
also short but to the point posts (poem in this case)