नए रिश्ते जुड़ न पाए, और पुराने टूट रहे है,
कभी गाँठ पड़ी थी जिनमे, वो धागे टूट रहे है,
नफरत के इस आंधी मे, कुछ अपने छूट रहे है,
जिस कांच की है ये दुनिया, वो शीशे टूट रहे है|
-आकाश
It's like a double-edged sword, either you can use it as a criticism on current political scenario where parties are making and breaking alliances. Or you can treat is as an sentimental poem targeted at human relationship.
Hmm... so ab du-dhaari talware bhi chalaane lage...:) very good one!!!
This is a good sort of poem,where the reader can take the sense according to his/her mental state.....
but my suggestion is that......plz don't put ur comment to poem for taking any thought....that hinders the thought of reader......:-)
n it defeats the purpose of poetry then.......
let people find their own meaning!!
@Vikas: thanks for nice useful inputs :-)